Hi,
I just visited your website and I was wondering if you would like to see my proposal of what I would suggest for your website. I would love the opportunity to show you our work. No commitment for future work, fine print or hidden anything- just an opportunity for you to see what some of our sites look like.

I'll be happy to show you some of our work in your industry to give you some ideas. You'll then get to see one way in which your site might be redesigned to cater to the customers of today. That's it! Would that be ok to send? Thanks in advance!

Warm Regards,
Rachel Thomas